i don't know whether or not i should stick with the sketchy-ness of the original that seems to have more character, or go for cleaner lineart because i really don't have patience for the latter (as evidenced below), not to mention that it looks flatter (but more anatomically correct!). i don't really seem to have that problem when I ink traditionally, maybe i just need to find out what works best for me that doesn't wear down my nerves
(Computer is acting strangely, having trouble exporting this file. Will update with file as soon as I am able.)
Edit: I probably spent the first half of that drawing saying to myself, "Don't forget her tattoos, don't forget her tattoos..."