Before I can review your game, I must let you know you did not reach the required 200 words on your essay. Therefore this essay will be counted as a strike unless you edit your submission to expand on your idea.
Your essay needs work in grammar as well, make sure to put . at the end of sentences, and be mindful of proper capitalization.
I would have liked to know more about your audience. For example, do you consider this a casual or a hardcode game?
The idea was very vague as well. What type of weapons does Candy use? Are they conventional guns, or more dog-friendly gadgets? Giving a few examplees would have helped you and the word count.
Looking forward to your edit on this submission. Otherwise it will not count.
Hey.
Before I can review your game, I must let you know you did not reach the required 200 words on your essay. Therefore this essay will be counted as a strike unless you edit your submission to expand on your idea.
Your essay needs work in grammar as well, make sure to put . at the end of sentences, and be mindful of proper capitalization.
I would have liked to know more about your audience. For example, do you consider this a casual or a hardcode game?
The idea was very vague as well. What type of weapons does Candy use? Are they conventional guns, or more dog-friendly gadgets? Giving a few examplees would have helped you and the word count.
Looking forward to your edit on this submission. Otherwise it will not count.
Cheers,
José.