Oh hey o/ many thx for your critique! =D

I' going to try this as soon as possible, since I'm a total begginer to painting I still find it hard to clean up the line art, and yeah, I feel it's kinda "blurry" too.

And lol I don't know if it is really a style yet, sometimes I hate the kinda of eyes I've been drawing, but since you found it cool, I gonna try to stick to that a little more.

And dont get envy, cause i'm already envy of your style hahaha xD

@Bobbo No no,you are right, realy got your idea! I'm going to try it, my problem it's just that I need to be bolder when painting in grayscale and try to risk more painting with the extreme values, I kinda just stay with the "mid" tones because of that =P

I'm also loving the grayscale stuff. It forces you to think about light and shadow.

I think that if you shared all the way up to white or a really light gray it would help make everything pop. Of course you might be going for a more muted look, in which case ignore me

Try taking away the background and then seeing the values of your drawing. It might be just me but when it's against the background i can't really tell how dark/light everything is. Maybe even change the colours of your lineart, so where it's really white, make the lineart white as well? It's just looking really blurry to me, but that's probably because you haven't cleaned the colouring up yet, haha.

Also your style is really cool. So much style envy right now.