Back on my computer, for a nostalgic and moody track. Not very happy with the violin part (it's off here and there) and this track would benefit from some additional work

Kedbreak1361 year ago

@Rain25 Thanks for taking the additional time to listen again and reply! :)

Rain251 year ago

@Kedbreak136 idk im listening to the track again i think the drums sound fine. maybe i didnt like the bass sound at 0:54... it was kind of moody intro and buildup into moody bit with violin and youve got this sort of bouncy 1234 1234 bassline maybe id just replace it with saw waves reese bass constant note or something idk. idk why i said the drums, i cant rlly think of anything in particular id change bout the drums. i really like 1:58 to the end.... that part is really cool. maybe actually now id criticise the melodies up until 1:58 in general didnt have a strong enough singular theme. but thats something i dont do very well.... yea i guess i just didnt like the bassline at 0:54. just in general i thought the melodies and chords sound pretty decent where the drums and bass might not sound as nice... but i cant rlly say anything more specific than that so pretty useless feedback. overall from my perspective having listened to ~10/20 earlier stuff uve uploaded i thought it overall sounded like progress caus idk id heard you do something like this before and i liked the overall vibe of the track. sorry i couldnt give more detailed feedback. yea listening again idk not too good at feedback but again i like 1:58-end.... my main reaction to the track was just ye nice one but i been trying to write feedbacks just to see if i like writing feedbacks. dont like writing feedbacks good thing i am not music critic.

even if i distill all this feedback into something succinct like 'nice, liked the vibe dis track sounds like progress or somethin to me ears keep it pumpin' or whatever. idk its just boring describing music with words in any way at all haha im fine with other ppl doing it, i liked some of the feedbacks uve said bout my uploads but yeeeee i just find it boring to say things bout music myself. i find it hard and i never rlly like my feedbacks but whatever its a good thing i like making music and not talking about music i guess caus i can just do that instead. i mean i could distill again into 'moody track, nice vibe. sick ending!'. like nah commenting on music is not for me. id probably type sickkkkkk track with a random amount of k's that might be pe muysic crutcyhikjsml

Kedbreak1361 year ago

@Rain25 Thank you for the comment and the feedback! What bothered me the most with the violin is that there are 2 points where the tempo is off and I can only hear this. :)

Good point on musicians with different backgrounds listening to different parts or focusing on different instruments. For instance, for the drums, what is the thing that you would change here, what is the thing that did not work well for you as a drummer?

Rain251 year ago

i dont intentially try be positive on ur tracks but........ but ahhh i dont think violin was weak aspect of this track. i think drums and bass might have been weaker, i thought violin was fine or even good or even nice.... idk i tend to like your tracks. dunno but cool track. id steal that pad from intro. i liked the violin. sometimes you mention parts of ur tracks u dont like that i like. im playing a lot of drums atm so im probably only hearing drums. i dont know think paradigm of 'br wut is weak aspect of this track' rlly makes sense in terms of making the shitfuck that is music but whatever u seemd cool with vague criticism i liked the vibes of this track reminds me a bit of something i would make because fuck vocalists

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