Still so bad at feet, I moved from trying to figure out the simplified shape off of photos to straight up copying the shapes in the tutorial - and I'm still disproportioned.

Decided last minute to pull the dialogue a bit further away - it was a mistake.
With this I've finally finished the 4 pages I planned out one week ago. I have an idea for how to continue it, but it requires a lot of faces and dialogue, so it'll probably be a while until I get around to do it.

Also decided to add in the initial draft I sketched. Out in the beginning. The only thing that's really changed from there is this final panel, which I had focused a lot more on the characters head.

Good thing I didn't write the dialogue down right away. I think I'm okay with it like this, but I still have to sleep it over. And even this took much too long to get to.