I'm slowly figuring out the pacing on this piece. At the end of my last writing session I figured out what was wrong with what I'd done so far and left myself some "breadcrumbs" to figure things out. I followed some of that trail today. I'm hearing things more clearly now...so if I can maintain this steak every day, I know I can get some momentum up in this piece. Or something like that.

No sound files...this all exists in old-school pencil on old-school paper.