Je retourne à mon synopsis. Je bosserai plus efficacement si je sais où vont mes idées.

Added more words to my text adventure. I'm amazed how much fun this still is.

An excerpt:

A Scream "Surprise motherfucker!" / B <say nothing>

A: You are scared to death, rise up from your seat, shriek embarrassingly high and bump your knees on the table. "Fuck! Why are you doing this?" You don't realize it, but people in the diner are staring at you. A waitress comes up to you and asks you if everything is alright. "What? Yes. I'm sorry." You raise your voice "I'm sorry everyone!" The waitress asks you to leave. "Please, Ma'am I can't leave. I'm gonna keep it down from now on, ok? I swear." She says ok. ->15

B: You sit there for a while, checking the door from time to time. A waitress approaches you and you order a tap water. She doesn't seem happy about that, but brings it anyway without a word. The door opens and three people enter the diner. Two men and a woman. You recognize them. It's the brothers, Victor and Vincent and Victor's girlfriend Tara, or Tamy or something. They walk over to your table in silence and sit down. Victor, the bigger one sits next to you, pushing you in the corner. Vincent sits in front of you and Tara/Tamy next to him. ->16